OMG, what a great update! I know I've said this before but I just love the way you write. Loved Jason Mort! LOL You come up with the best stuff and so suspenseful.
So many great descriptions "...the doors slid open with a mechanical breath worthy of Darth Vader."
"The sheets blanketed the bodies like tissue paper over forgotten Christmas presents."
"just objects with pretty little tags, like dolls in a toy shop."
"The kind of voice that made the naggings of a Yiddish grandmother seem pleasant."
and “Don’t tell Wilson I cried over him. He might make me watch ‘The Notebook’ again.”
Really love this story. The only disappointing thing about this chapter is the number 16/17. Please, Please, Please don't make 17 the last chapter! :D
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So many great descriptions "...the doors slid open with a mechanical breath worthy of Darth Vader."
"The sheets blanketed the bodies like tissue paper over forgotten Christmas presents."
"just objects with pretty little tags, like dolls in a toy shop."
"The kind of voice that made the naggings of a Yiddish grandmother seem pleasant."
and “Don’t tell Wilson I cried over him. He might make me watch ‘The Notebook’ again.”
Really love this story. The only disappointing thing about this chapter is the number 16/17. Please, Please, Please don't make 17 the last chapter! :D