I swear I remember commenting on the original story. I read it way after the fact because I read your 2nd story first and then looked for this one. I have to say I didn't think the original needed improvement. I'm definitely liking the lines in this one.
So many to choose from. Some of my favorites:
"This unfortunate situation arose from a bad business meeting between cane and floor."
"Cilson, Wuddy, Carmen Electra"
"He wanted to breeze through the file, to get the team out of their Sudoku comas." I love Sudoku!
“Cameron wanted me to write her a letter of recommendation to the Scandinavian Women’s Mud-Wrestling Team.”
The absolute best line "the only reason House wasn’t dead was because neither God nor Satan could put up with him".
You always write a great story. So true to character and the dialog is dead on. Looking forward to reading it again! :D Reading your stories is like watching an episode.
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So many to choose from. Some of my favorites:
"This unfortunate situation arose from a bad business meeting between cane and floor."
"Cilson, Wuddy, Carmen Electra"
"He wanted to breeze through the file, to get the team out of their Sudoku comas." I love Sudoku!
“Cameron wanted me to write her a letter of recommendation to the Scandinavian Women’s Mud-Wrestling Team.”
The absolute best line "the only reason House wasn’t dead was because neither God nor Satan could put up with him".
You always write a great story. So true to character and the dialog is dead on. Looking forward to reading it again! :D Reading your stories is like watching an episode.