Just took a bit of a break to read this chapter, and ... whoa. This is so good.
You've got House's humor, his thought process, his defensive strategies -- it's wonderful. The descriptions -- of the chair; of the feeling of a homeless man walking past the place where he used to live -- are so inventive and vivid.
I laughed out loud at Cuddy's "dying children/yo-yo" quip, and how sneaky of her to use Wilson's pager.
EDITING TO ADD that, now that I've gushed over this, I scroll back up and see ... your disclaimer.
I think it's time to stop apologizing. :-) If this story ever sucked, I can't tell so far.
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You've got House's humor, his thought process, his defensive strategies -- it's wonderful. The descriptions -- of the chair; of the feeling of a homeless man walking past the place where he used to live -- are so inventive and vivid.
I laughed out loud at Cuddy's "dying children/yo-yo" quip, and how sneaky of her to use Wilson's pager.
EDITING TO ADD that, now that I've gushed over this, I scroll back up and see ... your disclaimer.
I think it's time to stop apologizing. :-) If this story ever sucked, I can't tell so far.