Oh I was so happy to see you updated. I just love your descriptions. The reference to House climbing the hill compared to a Golden Retriever was really good. Also, the levels of pain.
So many great lines "He thought he could write a love ballad to Vicodin if he had paper, patience, and a knack for imagery." Another excellent line "the number was large enough to put in scientific notation."
"For the first time, Gregory House’s ambition outweighed his talent." I felt so sorry for him.
I really liked the way House talks about not wanting to see regurgitated beef jerky but then remembers he's already seen it.
Wonderful description "His vision blurred, and he slithered on, like a fly without wings—the kind that needs to be put out of his misery, but is too stubborn to get a hold of." Wow!
As if that wasn't enough, you went ahead and wrote Cuddy's progress as well. Can't believe they both made it to the top! Excellent job. Can't wait to read more. Especially interested in what's going on with Wilson. Thanks! :D
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Date: 2008-09-26 08:39 pm (UTC)So many great lines "He thought he could write a love ballad to Vicodin if he had paper, patience, and a knack for imagery." Another excellent line "the number was large enough to put in scientific notation."
"For the first time, Gregory House’s ambition outweighed his talent." I felt so sorry for him.
I really liked the way House talks about not wanting to see regurgitated beef jerky but then remembers he's already seen it.
Wonderful description "His vision blurred, and he slithered on, like a fly without wings—the kind that needs to be put out of his misery, but is too stubborn to get a hold of." Wow!
As if that wasn't enough, you went ahead and wrote Cuddy's progress as well. Can't believe they both made it to the top! Excellent job. Can't wait to read more. Especially interested in what's going on with Wilson. Thanks! :D